Critique 4

I am a big fan of poetry, I like reading it. I like to write it, and enjoy learning about it.
One thing I didn't like about elegy writing was the disconnection I felt in some of the poetry.
Elegies are by no means lacking emotion or passion, distress whichever feeling they have, these elements are certainly there. I feel as if there is a difference of aim from an elegy as compared to a mournful poem of lonesomeness. I don't know exactly what that tiny change is, but I am going to find out.